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Friday, September 29, 2017

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TITLE There’s 5 minutes left he shoots,buzzer beater North Cross win the finals for basketball.They went to the middle of the court and shook hands.Then to their coach he said “great game kids you won the finals by 38 points!”. They celebrate Jake goes over to Thomas and says “great game”. They go home. Thomas goes to his brother Carlos and said “we won our games”. Thomas goes straight to his bedroom and on his laptop to watch a movie.His mum comes in and says “come and have dinner”.Thomas says “I will be there in 10 minutes”. Today was the last day of the year.At lunch he plays basketball and ankle brakes a lot of people and all his shots were swishes. Then the day ended he walked home and started to watch movies.Now it was the holidays where he gets no screens because he is out all the time. Thomas first half of the first day at college was a success.Then the best basketball player in the school well that’s what he thinks.He goes over to Thomas and says “want to play one on one”.Thomas says yes and beats him .On the fifth week of school he says “I wants to play basketball”.His first games he won 95-68 .The next games he lost 86-68 and 48-78 because he was lazy.But on the third term they were in a tournament to in $5000 he won all their games by at least 20 points.But the finals Rangitoto vs Rosmini.Rangitoto have never bet Rosmini but Thomas’s 3 pointers all went in his layups and all his dunks went in.There was 5 seconds the crowd suddenly went quiet it was like there was no crowd.They were losing 70-68 3 seconds 1 second Thomas shot and he sunk it and finally the crowd came back .They won 71-70 that was there first time winning they took the trophy home.But that wasn't the only good thing Thomas was not lazy any more.”