Brynn @ Pinehill School
Friday, September 29, 2017
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There’s 5 minutes left he shoots,buzzer beater North Cross win the finals for basketball.They went to the middle of the court and shook hands.Then to their coach he said “great game kids you won the finals by 38 points!”.
They celebrate Jake goes over to Thomas and says “great game”. They go home. Thomas goes to his brother Carlos and said “we won our games”.
Thomas goes straight to his bedroom and on his laptop to watch a movie.His mum comes in and says “come and have dinner”.Thomas says “I will be there in 10 minutes”.
Today was the last day of the year.At lunch he plays basketball and ankle brakes a lot of people and all his shots were swishes.
Then the day ended he walked home and started to watch movies.Now it was the holidays where he gets no screens because he is out all the time.
Thomas first half of the first day at college was a success.Then the best basketball player in the school well that’s what he thinks.He goes over to Thomas and says “want to play one on one”.Thomas says yes and beats him
.On the fifth week of school he says “I wants to play basketball”.His first games he won 95-68 .The next games he lost 86-68 and 48-78 because he was lazy.But on the third term they were in a tournament to in $5000 he won all their games by at least 20 points.But the finals Rangitoto vs Rosmini.Rangitoto have never bet Rosmini but Thomas’s 3 pointers all went in his layups and all his dunks went in.There was 5 seconds the crowd suddenly went quiet it was like there was no crowd.They were losing 70-68 3 seconds 1 second Thomas shot and he sunk it and finally the crowd came back .They won 71-70 that was there first time winning they took the trophy home.But that wasn't the only good thing Thomas was not lazy any more.”
Monday, September 18, 2017
Wednesday, April 12, 2017
L.I to use language features ✓
L.I to use paragraphs ✓
L.I To use different ways of starting my sentences ✓
I was walking to the pines to go mountain biking with my group and sam.I saw a lot of bikes and ramps I heard birds chirping as if they were chirping a song.
Sam asked us our favourite marine/sea animal,our name and our biking experiences.after that he showed us how to fit a helmet I didn't quite get it so Mr Rhodes helped me.then he showed how to size the bike so we went of to do that.I pulled the holder thingy and put the seat to my hips and went to face the river and we shot of like a bullet of a bb gun.
we went down the dip and then up the dip we went to a massive field of grass.then he showed us the top of the waterfall it was so cool then we went over the short and long ramps and then over the seesaw we went around in circles. I was so proud of myself.
Monday, March 6, 2017
the desert
One day I was on a plane about to parachute out into a desert.I landed on top of a sand dune luckily I have a boogie board.I boogie boarded down the sand dune.I got some water out of my bag and walked.after a while I found a village.Two people showed we around the village.They showed me the shelters then they showed me a pool that they made.I jumped into the pool like I was boiling.I swam for about 45 minutes when I got out I dried myself.Then I searched for a big rock.After 10 minutes I found a big rock and a rock to draw with and came back.I said to the people I will show you a fun game it is called noughts and crosses.I will show you how to play.You draw two lines down and two lines across.Then you take turns to get three in a row. Whoever gets three in a row wins.who wants to play i said everyone wants to play.Okay guys lets play we all start playing.after a while we finish and go to bed.I wake up and get ready to leave.I get food,water and organise everything in my bag.Then I leave after about 20 minutes I see a massive sand dune.I can't go around it because it is too wide I can’t go under it because the sand will fall on me.I have to go over it.It takes me about 45 minutes to climb up the sand dune.I get my boogie board and go down the other side on my feet.I do some tricks to make it fun.I jump off my board and run,then I jump and land on my board.I call the people that got me here to pick me up.then I start running and I trip I land on a piece of wood and break my leg. They arrive and drop a ladder down I grab onto the ladder and climb up the ladder to the plane.
Friday, February 10, 2017
in be at night
IN BED AT NIGHT
At night I walk into my bedroom and pull the covers up.Then I jump into bed and pull the covers over myself.Next I move around into different positions until I find a really cumfy spot to relax.
When I’m laying down I can see the light playing..shining brightly outside the door.I stare at the light like I am a statue in a bed.When I stop staring at the light I get out of bed and turn off the light and get back into bed.
As soon as I get into bed I hair the tv playing.So I guess what is on tv.When I guess I get out of bed and tell whoever is watching tv to turn the volume down and then I go back to bed.
Friday, October 14, 2016
IN THE MORNING
1.wake up
2.get out of bed
3.get dressed
4.go toilet
5.make breakfast
6.eat breakfast
7.put on shoes
8.brush teeth
9.make lunch
10.pack bag
11. go to school
Tuesday, September 1, 2015
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